When deciding upon the script for our film we drafted a number of versions to make sure that the dialogue matched the action. This was our second draft which we preferred as we thought it was funnier and added a more prominent comic element to the film.
(Steph’s entrance) Singing- Today this could be the greatest day of our lives
(Lauren bumps into Steph) Bitch
(Picking up books, Ryan enters) Romeo, Romeo where for out tho Romeo oh… is that him? Oh God it is. Do you think he likes my new glasses?
(Canteen scene) Come on Steph! Right he’s always in here, you can do it, just go up and say hi. Come on you had a connection! You look good together! The Photoshop pictures prove it! Oh. He’s not here. I’ll just carry on practising my signature…Mrs….
(Book Scene) His skin was like a Grecian God, his eyes like an azure blue. Oh please! Don’t make me sick! Id never be that obsessed with someone and make a complete idiot of myself!
(Park conversation scene) What do I say? I’m not prepared! I forgot my notes! Right just smile and nod smile and nod. What my house! Whoo! Get in Steph! Hi five!
(Make-up scene) Guys these days just seem to go for the tangy cheese dorito look. I mean it cant be that hard to do. Mascara. Right now this could be dangerous! Just blink and curl. I don’t think its supposed to go on my eyelids! Maybe you wont be able to see it with my glasses on. Nope still crap I need a makeup wipe!
(Knock on the door) That must be the hairdresser. Good job she could come at such short notice. It cost me more but he’s so worth it!
(Window scene) NO! He’s here early! Stupid bloody hairdresser! Why didn’t she get some proper qualifications, like time keeping or something!
(Stairs) Where the hell are my notes?! What do I say? Hey? Hello? Hi?
(Door scene) Is he… is he checking me out?! Oh God. This was not in my notes!
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